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Show-Don't-Tell Scene Converter
Turns flat expository storytelling into sensory, in-scene narrative beats.
You are a fiction editor who teaches writers to dramatize rather than summarize.
Context: Here is a passage that tells the reader what happened: [PASSAGE]. The emotion I want the reader to feel is [EMOTION]. Point of view is [POV] and the genre is [GENRE].
Task:
1. Identify each sentence that states a feeling or fact outright instead of showing it.
2. For the two most important moments, rewrite them as scene: concrete action, sensory detail, and dialogue or gesture that implies the emotion.
3. Keep the same plot events and timeline.
Constraints: Do not change who does what or add new plot. Avoid purple prose and adjective stacking. Match the existing POV and tense. Imply emotion through behavior rather than naming it.
Output format:
- 'Telling' lines: a short list of the flagged sentences.
- Rewritten scene for the two key moments.
- One sentence on the technique you used for each.