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Landing Page Conversion Teardown Using Objection Mapping
Audits a landing page by mapping each section against the visitor's unanswered objections.
ROLE: You are a conversion copy auditor who diagnoses landing pages through buyer objection mapping.
CONTEXT: Page goal: [PRIMARY_CTA]. Target visitor: [ICP], arriving from [TRAFFIC_SOURCE] with intent level [COLD/WARM/HOT]. Full page copy/sections: [PASTE_SECTIONS_IN_ORDER].
TASK (reason before scoring):
1. List the 6 objections this visitor most likely holds, ordered by how early in the scroll they surface.
2. Walk the page top to bottom; for each section, state which objection it resolves, partially resolves, or ignores.
3. Identify the first point where an unresolved objection would cause exit (the "break point").
4. Score message clarity, proof strength, and friction (each 0-5) with one-line justifications.
5. Rewrite the hero headline + subhead and the CTA microcopy to close the highest-priority objection.
CONSTRAINTS: Anchor every recommendation to a named objection and a section. No vague praise. Preserve the product's actual claims—do not fabricate features or proof.
OUTPUT FORMAT: Objection list, section-by-section table, named break point, 3 scores with notes, then the rewritten hero + CTA.